努力作文

Miss Chan Chan 每年都會任教會考班。去年完成了一班全級最好的27位Form 5精英組, 所以今年繼續從F.4開始，任教全級中四英文最弱的一組，共有24位同學。這組學生大部份都很願意學習，只是他們的根基太弱，實在無力承受艱深的會考英文課程。但無力歸無力，課程始終要跟著走，只是Miss Chan Chan在教學中會給他們多一點時間及幫忙。

最近，我們要作文，題目是write a story based on a given situation，類似續寫故事的文章。看到學生Y交來的功課，Miss Chan Chan 很欣賞他的毅力與努力，在極度有限的英文水平下交來了172字的作文。雖然，Miss Chan Chan 只能很努力才可以勉強看懂，亦只能象徵式的給了幾分，但Y的毅力確是讓人敬佩。

很多朋友說不了解現在的學生英文到底有多"好"，我也不知從何說起。所以，在得到學生Y的同意下，我把部份文章轉載....

請大家不要取笑他，因為以他只有小一生的英文水平，實在是花了九牛二虎之力才能達標(最少150字)。如果大家真的想理解Y的文章，只要你用中文來想想這些字句，就可以明白。以下第一段是故事開端，人人也是一樣的。

One day, my friend and I were walking home from school when I heard a burglar alarm ringing. It was coming from a closed shop. The door of the shop was slightly opened. At first, I could not see anything because the shop was dark inside. But then, I saw someone with a torch walking carefully through the back of the door.

Then, I with the friend shouted that  'was inferior we go in shop looked has had any matter?' but my friend shouted to me, 'the shop very dark and very fearful I not afraid. We go home as soon as possible.'

But my curiosity causes me to go in certainly to shop look. Therefore, I invitation my friend goes home first and not need to pay attention to me.

After I entered the shop, me first to open the lamp. Then I discovered that everywhere is the sheet glass and all jewelery does not here. I heard who the back door to open sound, therefore, I immediately went out the shop. Then, I to see to have a strnager left hand to took the knife, right hand from the group to take a jewelery. Therefore, I immediately call to 999.

Police arrive a shop, very quick, strangger has also discovered on stranger pack jewellery back door outside. Finally, police give me certificate.

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四年前，Miss Chan Chan曾任教當年還在唸中一的學生Y。當年他仍是一個頑皮小子，到今天，他定性了，只希望他會發憤唸好英文。